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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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The upper lid is a bit sharp. You should work on softening it up a little bit in future pieces. The angle of the eyebrow is also a bit awkward, but that very well could just be an effect of the sharp eyelid.
My biggest critique would be in the iris and pupil area. The pupil should be a bit closer to the center, perhaps with a little shine on it. eyes are very commonly seen with a little shine around the pupil. The iris should then have a lot of texture to it. I'm not sure I could pull off that kind of texture I'm talking about in color, as that is something that is incredibly hard. For me at least. My medium is graphite pencils. Anyway, I'm not sure I could do very well to explain the kind of texture that you should shoot for in the iris, so you should check out this tutorial [link]. It's not my tutorial (I don't have a scanner and can't post my drawings) but I find it incredibly helpful. If you can improve using a graphite pencil, then you can work up to creating the same affect in color (which I have no idea how to do).
By the way, with the sharp eyelid it kind of makes it look like a part of some sort of sharp abstract piece. It's actually kind of cool.
hope this helps~
Unfortunately, it's not mine....